...but I personally favour the demo version because of the depth of sound.
Yes, I'm seeing a trend here. After a while it's hard to hear a mix, so it's good to get feedback. I think I'll let this one sit for a while, and then perhaps play with it a bit more.
You're in good company with songs like "Dream A Little Dream Of Me", "Falling In Love With Love", "I Dreamed A Dream" (from Les Miserables).
I was thinking of you when I wrote the caveat. The sad truth is that some of these weren't intentional. I got so focused on small details in the rewrite (such as the alliteration of
"some sunset") that it wasn't until after I'd done the song that I noticed the larger details I'd let slip by.
There's no particular offense to doing that if that was the intent, but I do it happens by accident... That's just sloppy work.
Thanks!