Fun song. I like what you have done with you vocal. Did you record two takes and pan one off to the side?
I'd keep working on it. Sounds like your'e not used to singing it yet.
Manybe it would sound better in the chorus with just two "troubles". Three times sounds like it's too much. I think the song has potential.

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