Hi Charlie.

As Noel says, you've got lots of expert advice here, so it's difficult for me to add anything else.

What I can say is that I really liked the song.

I always find that one of the hardest things is deciding when a production is actually finished and there's this temptation to keep adding tracks which don't contribute anything. To me, your song sounds great as it is. Maybe try tweaking the mix a bit in line with some of the previous suggestions, but leave the arrangement alone. Different doesn't always equate to better.

ROG.