I coulda swore I commented on this already..... but I can't find it... I might have clicked off the page.... I've done that before.

I remember writing about the line "If the river was whiskey...." That's in an old Savory Brown song called Louisiana Blues. Savoy had just broken up, and Foghat was the new band that came out of the breakup.... man I loved that song.... and when I went to the Foghat show, their hit song at the time was, "I just wanna make love to you", they didn't really have many other hits, so they covered a bunch of SB tunes and Louisiana Blues was one of them and they jammed it out to fill some stage time.

Your version is cool... nice instrumentation and vocals.

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