I looked at this post whilst at work ... couldn't listen, now I can (right before bedtime LOL).
You really set the story well with your introduction to this song. There are only a few of those that I could possibly make, but those tunes were not generated with a BIAB product.
At any rate: this really has me involved in the story you are telling. Mesmerizing, really! SO many emotions in this one....
You do well at the 'rap' style, btw

Congrats on a song well done!!!