I think that you have a fantastic start here and in fact I think that it is almost finished. My thoughts are this:
1-I like the drums but they need more snap and pop to them. Compression and EQ are your friends here.
2-I think a little harmony would sound great.

This is a really good song.


I think my wife has started to show the first signs of dementia.
She said she can't remember what she ever saw in me!

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