Good job with the writing and musical production. The song has a nice sentiment to it and works well as is. Musically a bridge section that goes farther away from verse/chorus you have might add to the song. Also on the third chorus you might break it down - could be vocal only or minimal instrumentation to get us away from the established rhythm pattern (maybe some melody notes held longer than usual) so that we are ready to hear it once again on the last chorus. The singing was super by the way.