OK, I'll take you up on that challenge:
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What do you think?
Well, that didn't take long, eh!
Very nice story there too, we may be on to something fruitful here
On a more technical note though, are you quite sure the words/syllables match the notes completely? Or maybe I'm just not 'hearing' he phrases right
Would you mind if I 'meddled' with it a bit and see if I can't make it all match & come together? For as I said, I really think we may be on to something here
