Hi, Carolyne.

Nice tune, and you're expressive as always.

I don't hear any clipping, but here's what I think I'm hearing.

The MIDI guitar sounds very... cheap? I think a "real" strummed guitar would give the track a bit more drive.

The harmonies sound synthetic, and distractingly so. I'm guessing you're using the vocal track to generate the harmonies. In general, it's better to use a neutrally sung melody line as the basis of the harmony track. That way, it has a bit more independence from the main vocal, and it sits in the background a bit better. Plus, you get less artifacts from the pitch shifting algorithm.

That said, it's a nice song, and the positives heavily outweigh the negatives I mentioned.

-- David


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?