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It's all BIAB.
RealTracks in song: 1825:Bass, Electric, PopModernGrooveHeld Ev16 075
RealTracks in song: 1757:Accordion, Rhythm Pop8ths Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 1766:Mandolin, Rhythm Pop16Sync Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 1856:Cello, Background PopCountry Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 1765:Guitar, High-Strung Acoustic, Fingerpicking Pop16ths Ev16 085
RealTracks in song: 1606:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Pop16ths Ev16 110
RealDrums in Song: PraiseWorshipSlow16ths^1-a:H24, b:SRC
Moonlight Embers (8-29-10)
the sisters and the mothers will cross me with their sorrow
before morning’s first light to lay my hopes low
and the storm in the trees she whispers of tomorrow
and the woman they call gypsy the only one that seems to know
I’ll do what I can, I’ll lie if I have to
I need you to be here when the sun wakes again
I wait and I wonder with wanting deception
I crawl through the silver that the star lights have lain
she stares in the moonlight with eyes bright as embers
and renders the flesh from my bones
and the silence inside her leads straight to disaster
and where her dreams come from, well ain't nobody knows
I’ll do what I can, I’ll lie if I have to
I need you to be here when the sun wakes again
I wait and I wonder with wanting deception
I crawl through the silver that the star lights have lain
and memories of yesterday, will surely destroy you
and sorrow is regret's [*****] son
and the hunger you’re feeling will all but consume you
if you can't reconcile with the things you done
I wait by the water for the woman they call gypsy
but there just ain't no tellin where that river’s flown
but her eyes are the moonlight burning bright as embers
I suppose she has returned to her mountain home
Last edited by Andrew - PG Music; 08/24/20 02:47 PM.
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Lawrence, I could listen to your voice all night long. Nicely written and produced. Great to have you back! Tom
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Lawrence,
Great to see you back around!
Great write. Tasty production and mix. Always love hearing you sing!
floyd
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Hi Lawrence,
Tom is not the only one who could listen to your voice
all night long. A great production.
I'd like to see the lyrics printed.
Guenter
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Hi Lawrence,
Welcome back. Love the production. I too always enjoy hearing you sing.
Josie
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Very nice. Enjoyed listening to this a lot.
Charlie
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Beautiful!! Arrangement, lyrics, production all work great. I'd love to find something original to say but, like others, I just love your vocals. Your voice has a great texture-really rich and full of character. Great stuff! Great to have you back! Take care. Greg
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Lawrence, I could listen to your voice all night long. Nicely written and produced. Great to have you back! Tom Thanks for the welcome back. I had to step back for a bit to recharge. Glad you liked it.
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Lawrence,
Great to see you back around!
Great write. Tasty production and mix. Always love hearing you sing!
floyd
Glad to be back. Thank you for the kind words.
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Hi Lawrence,
Tom is not the only one who could listen to your voice
all night long. A great production.
I'd like to see the lyrics printed.
Guenter Thank you for listening. I added the lyrics. Some of the lines are variations of or allusions to a song titled "Lung" by my favorite songwriter Townes Van Zandt.
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Hi Lawrence,
Welcome back. Love the production. I too always enjoy hearing you sing.
Josie Thank you for the welcome back and for the kind words.
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Very nice. Enjoyed listening to this a lot.
Charlie Happy to hear you enjoyed it.
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Beautiful!! Arrangement, lyrics, production all work great. I'd love to find something original to say but, like others, I just love your vocals. Your voice has a great texture-really rich and full of character. Great stuff! Great to have you back! Take care. Greg That's very generous of you to say. Thank you. A few years back I was encouraged by a friend who has a PHD in music to always sing "full voice". So I've been doing my best to follow his advice.
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Lawrence,
Everything about this is absolutely stunning... No words. Love it.
Bob
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Lawrence,
I read the comments first, so I was very curious to hear that voice... The comments are absolutely right! You have a great natural country style singing talent. Harmonies were subtle but effective.
The song is well written. Well build up. At the end the song fades out, personally I would have finished it with your last word "done"
A great listen, hope to hear more of you in the future,
Grtz
Fred
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Missed you, but man what a re-entry.
There is a vocal styling/sound that cuts across
what we call Americana and you have
it nailed. Lights out nailed. Great write
and a terrific arrangement and mix
to support it all. Welcome back indeed.
J&B
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I started to listen this morning but got distracted by other things.....
What a cool tune. I love the way you used the accordion and the drums were so "off the wall" outrageously good....those P&W tracks are really nice if you want or need something other than a straight beat.
Good work on the lyrics too.... some cool lines in this.
Listening again.... good stuff.
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
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Hi Lawrence,
Beautiful song, music, vocals, everything.....
Glad to see you're back.
Rob and Anne-Marie
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Lawrence,
Everything about this is absolutely stunning... No words. Love it.
Bob So glad to hear you enjoyed it
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Lawrence,
I read the comments first, so I was very curious to hear that voice... The comments are absolutely right! You have a great natural country style singing talent. Harmonies were subtle but effective.
The song is well written. Well build up. At the end the song fades out, personally I would have finished it with your last word "done"
A great listen, hope to hear more of you in the future,
Grtz
Fred Thank you for stopping in for a listen and glad that you liked it. I will give your consideration about the end a go in my DAW and if I agree I may make the change.
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