Charlie this is really good. I like the " Cheating Songs and Old Milwaukee made a fool of me it's 3 am, I'm half drunk, acting 23". Myself and I'm sure most all on this forum have seen those guys, especially if you played in a bar. That brought back some great funny memories!

Personally except for that ending I like this as it is now. For the ending I cut and past a few of the last measures then fade them out.

Regardless I really like this song,

Ps but I don't like Old Milwaukee beer!


Whenever I get something stuck in the back of my throat, I dislodge it by drinking a beer.
It's called the Heineken Maneuver.

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware