Very cool... this is a good song.... well done in every aspect.

BB does BG music really well....

Probably the only nit I have with this is the number of stops you used. One is good. It adds something different, kinda like spice... it makes an interesting diversion, but throw in a bunch and it's like you used too much salt in the soup. IMHO

Everything else is well done. Totally enjoyable and from what I've heard from you at this point... your best effort so far.


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