Ron
No bad notes but I have two minor comments.
1 perhaps a little vibrato on the sustained notes.
2 The ending needs to be a bit more dynamic.
I am in no position to criticise. Though I play other instruments I have been battling the pedal steel for a couple of years Battling discribes it pretty well I was using an old Shobud but my wife just treated me to a beautiful Carter Magnum. levers & pedals are much easier to work for my tired old leg muscles. Everybody will be pleased to hear that I still don't play well enough to post anything.Keep up the good work..Hank