very energetic and fun song! Are you a Brit by any chance? Your avatar doesn't identify your location...

I liked the RT used for guitar decorations, it matched the song quite well and I can imagine a real guitar player playing that to your chords

The lyrics are consistently formatted from verse to verse, and that's pretty cool... but above the layout of the lyrics, they are presented in phrases that are interesting to hear and consider in light of the message.

If that version was you singing, I thought you did an admirable job of presenting the song in a way that works for the genre

The fade out was kind of abrupt... played live, a song like this could end for a full minute! But even as a recording, the most natural fade would be longer

All in all a very lively and fun song! At my age I could never get away with this topic... I'd be more likely to sing about Alzheimers...
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