Agree a bit with Rob's comments. The start was a bit unexpected, and the vocals were difficult to understand, (don't take offense, please, but phonetically a little mumbled? I understood some words, but many were missed).

The chorus and harmonies gave a great improvement to the vocal.

The choice of styles was very good. That and the chorus were the strong points of the song.

I too would like to see the actual lyrics.

Bottom line, thanks for a genuine effort, paying a little more attention to the clarity of the lyrics if you can would make a good song great.

Trevor


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