Please remember that these are still "conceptual graphics" or "idea-starters".

I even violated my own "no space rule" in the address frame.

Also, I love symmetry so the waveform, being heavy on the port side, begs to be replaced. All text needs to be centered.

The text in the address frame can be opened up then reduced to a smaller type size. Perhaps the smallest legible size. That would allow concatenation of vital information on fewer lines.

I sort of like the hawk in the earlier graphic, not as a mascot, but as a source of adjectives: soar; higher; flight; air; sight; excellence; strength; etc. The hawk can easily be reduced in size.

Remember, this is only conceptual.

Donny

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