Hi George - listened to your tune with my morning cuppa coffee. Nice balance, nice flow, nice voice. Multi vocal tracks is the way to go, then pick and choose your best phrases - called comping, it's a major studio recording technique of the stars. You said there was no rhyme or reason to your songwriting . . . that's when it's fun - an idea from out of nowhere and then you run with it. BIAB is great for that - choose a style, put in a chord progression over eight bars - and see what the resulting music inspires.

You talk about taking out the accent - I was always amazed how the act of just singing could take the Liverpudlian out of the Beatles most of the time. A job well done George.

Ian
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