Interesting song. You use some interesting styles.

This fits quite well to what you were looking to accomplish. Depression era music....

The first two verses had me thinking this was about a hobo and his dog.... not too many women would put up with the situation described in those verses..... stealing eggs, living under bridges ..... at least very few that I know. But since a dog can't whistle..... that kinda blew that line of thought. Reading the comments by others and you.... at least I have the hobo part right.

Nice job on this

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