Really nice.

Ditto on the harmony comments.. really well done.

The part of this that grabbed me was the lyric writing in the choruses. Word smithery at it's finest.

Sax was cool but I'd probably have used it for fills a bit earlier so that it didn't come as a total surprise in the solo. A few notes at the end of the choruses would have introduced it earlier.

Probably one of the better writes in this forum this year so far.



The nits: I can't quite put my finger on it but the drums don't seem to fit right. Maybe too loud, or too busy in places. Or the treatment.... a reverb that puts it in a different sonic place than the rest of the song. Perhaps a combo of several.

Excellent job.

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