pw,
simply phenomenal! great vox, great production. i agree about the intro being a tad too long. my ears were getting anxious for the vocals. also, i think 6-plus minutes is a might long for a song in these hurried times. i doubt it would get much air time on the radio. i suggest you cut it down to 3:30 or 4:00 max. but then that's just this man's humble opinion. i really enjoy your wordsmithing. very catchy and memorable phrasing. well done, poppa.