SD,

Haiku. What a clever idea to use for lyric presentation.

I've long known the format of 17 syllables presented in 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables but I've never ever tried to write one. It seemed too challenging for me. I've just done a bit of research and what I didn't know was that Haiku are generally about a feeling or image created by nature. No wonder you chose it.

I'm incredibly impressed that you worked within the Haiku constraints and produced such a terrific sounding piece of music.

This is my favourite Haiku...

Quote:
With April’s cool breeze
Cherry petals float and fly
Snowflakes of the trees

The metaphor of blossoms as snowflakes is very creative and very visual. When I heard it, it was like I could nearly reach out and touch them. Awesome!

Overall... a very, very enjoyable musical and lyrical journey.

All the best,
Noel




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