Originally Posted By: tommyad
Originally Posted By: Rob4580
Hello musiclover.
Found this an interesting write.
Great lyrics.
I feel you may need to try this in another key.
Over all very well done.
Rob
+1. I agree this is a good write. It is catchy, but I think it needs to be transposed up a bit. I really enjoyed it. Tom


Thanks Tom for having a listen, pleased you find it a catchy enough tune.

Unfortunately transposing it up is not possible for me (though probably not apparent on first hearing song) as its in Key B and the lyrics in chorus (amongst those stars) have notes Eb Db and b the Eb being an octave + 3 semitones above middle c, just about reach that Eb.

Thanks for having a listen.
Musiclover

Last edited by musiclover; 06/23/15 10:42 PM.
Musiclover

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