Originally Posted By: dcuny
Nice song.

Although this stuck out like a sore thumb:

I tried to call you at the midnight hour,
But you were busy in your ivory tower,

You want to avoid cliches like the plague. (See what I did there? I'm a horrible, horrible person. laugh )

I'll join the group in saying not to sweat your voice, but still try to present it in the best light. Pitching the song up a bit forces a bit more breath support and gives clearer pitch. Two birds with one stone! (OK, I'll stop already. wink )

Seems like I'm spending a disproportionate amount of time whining about a song that's actually rather good.


I really appreciate you taking the time to have a listen David and your comments. I also appreciate someone being totally honest (instead of praise praise its perfect) that is the only way I can improve my writing and recording techniques.

This key b does seem a bit low and you would think I could move it up a tone or so, but highest note in song (amongst those stars) is actually Eb an octave and 3 semitones above middle C just about reach it.

Once again appreciate your listen and honesty.

Musiclover

Last edited by musiclover; 06/27/15 08:35 AM.
Musiclover

My music https://www.youtube.com/user/donegalprideofall

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