Hi, Robert,

Of the new ones, I picked "Give Me Rest" (instrumentals are not really "my thing")...

Excellent write!

A couple of "production suggestions" - it is already very good - so these aren't necessary - but this is so good, I think it is worth coming back to later...

For this type song, it's nice to have a BIG sustained guitar chord hitting on the chorus. Make a 2nd SGU that is all HELD chords (in the spots where it seems appropriate) and find a guitar that his those hard - the Brent Rock soloist works great for this - and add those to your chorus.

Also, I thought you might let the band come back in on the 2nd half of that last chorus - let it "rock out"...

Nice work.

floyd

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