Hi Noel agree with what you say. My songs are all like that. Running on to new ideas before fully developing the last one. I guess I'm a starter rather than a finisher. I guess the message was meant to be that the rhino situation is part of a much larger and more complex problem. Delighted to have spurred you on a little. Cheers.
You do write hard-hitting lyrics - good ones - and that's a gift! But, I agree that this is a bit wide-ranging.
On the other hand, you gave me a lot to think about. And since you were looking at the macro, wasn't that the point?
Good song.