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I try not to post songs so close together in time, but this one fell together so I just let it happen.
I wrote this song in 2007 but I've never recorded it. At the time I wrote it I was convinced that I had moved on from her; but I know now that I never will. So many songs that I have written are about her...
As played on guitar the verses are in 6/4 on the up beat, and the chorus is 4/4. But I managed to work it out and record it in a reggae style with BIAB. (By some fit of manipulation and magic.)
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Tangle With Love (8-1-2007)
My heart is fine I tell ya, I’ll be all right yes sir It’s just another leg on, leg on life’s journey A wild ride not a, final destination I can’t hide from the, from the realization
I had a little tangle with love, I should Know by now I just can’t fool around with love I had a little tangle with love And it left me just a little confused
A heart unbound like a, like a rose petal A world unkind but I, no I won’t settle I’ll put myself out there, every time I will I will tare down, all the walls I build I had a little tangle with love, I should Know by now I just can’t fool around with love I had a little tangle with love And it left me more than a little confused
It’s not a story about redemption, it’s not a tale about sorrow or regret It may be a song about reflection, well I just don’t know yet
My heart is fine I tell ya, I’ll be alright yes sir It’s just another leg on, leg on life’s journey
I had a little tangle with love, I should Know by now I can’t fool around with love I had a little tangle with love But I can’t wait to tangle with love again
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Different, and I really like it. Your vocals are spot on. I found the drums a bit disconcerting but I think that has more to do with the meter of the song than anything. The song seemed to have a Zak Brown vibe to me which is good thing.
Overall, one of my favorites from you so far.
Enjoyed my listen, a lot. Going back for more.
Charlie
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Hi Lawrence, That's a very good composition Lawrence. The Reggae style is quite refreshing! We appreciate you not wanting to post several songs close together in time ..... We're pretty sure the song's theme will resonate with lots of people. Rob is no stranger to this kind of song Anne-Marie
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Different, and I really like it. Your vocals are spot on. I found the drums a bit disconcerting but I think that has more to do with the meter of the song than anything. The song seemed to have a Zak Brown vibe to me which is good thing.
Overall, one of my favorites from you so far.
Enjoyed my listen, a lot. Going back for more.
Charlie Charlie, thank you. The meter is 4/4. Hi Lawrence, That's a very good composition Lawrence. The Reggae style is quite refreshing! We appreciate you not wanting to post several songs close together in time ..... We're pretty sure the song's theme will resonate with lots of people. Rob is no stranger to this kind of song Anne-Marie Thank you. I've wanted to use the Reggae style for some time now and this song was well suited for it.
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I like everything about this! Super vocals and backing tracks put it over the top for me! I really liked that Reggae feel this one has and the lyrics were absolutely great!
Great work here!
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I like everything about this! Super vocals and backing tracks put it over the top for me! I really liked that Reggae feel this one has and the lyrics were absolutely great!
Great work here! Thanks Mario I enjoyed working in the Reggae style.
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Good one! Good fun. Very fine outro. Enjoyed it all. Cheers.
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Hey, thanks for posting this. I like Reggae and want to hear more examples.
Cool vocals by the way.
Cheers,
Billy
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Lawrence,
I'm with Mario on this. I lilke everything about this...
Reggae was a great place to take this. Cool write. Excellent vocal. Excellent arrangement. Nice mix.
Super.
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Hi Lawrence.
The backing is wonderful, but what's even better is your vocal performance.
What a great track and at the same time, refreshingly different.
Had to listen again.
ROG.
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Good one! Good fun. Very fine outro. Enjoyed it all. Cheers. Thank you, doing the harmonies at the end was fun! Hey, thanks for posting this. I like Reggae and want to hear more examples.
Cool vocals by the way.
Cheers,
Billy Thank you Billy. Lawrence,
I'm with Mario on this. I lilke everything about this...
Reggae was a great place to take this. Cool write. Excellent vocal. Excellent arrangement. Nice mix.
Super.
-floyd Thank you floyd it's fun to work in different styles Hi Lawrence.
The backing is wonderful, but what's even better is your vocal performance.
What a great track and at the same time, refreshingly different.
Had to listen again.
ROG.
Thank you Rog. Glad you enjoyed it
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Really, really nice! Sounds a little like Huey Lewis does Reggae. (That's a compliment.)
Thanks for sharing it!
Steve
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Really, really nice! Sounds a little like Huey Lewis does Reggae. (That's a compliment.)
Thanks for sharing it!
Steve
Thank you Steve.
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What a great feel-bursting with energy and life!! Arrangement rocks, and vocals are superb (as usual). Amazing job, great track!! Take care. Greg
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Great song. The vocals are fabulous - lead and background.
Excellent!!!
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Hey Lawrence,
Love this one. Gotta love da reggae. Everyting irie, mon! Like Steve, I'm hearing a Huey Lewis influence as well - which is a very good thing. Your voice is distinctive.
Regards,
Bob
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Hi Lawrence,
Reggae is a good choice for this song. Great lyrics, vocals, arrangement and mix. I enjoyed this.
Guenter
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Lawrence, Well written and arranged. The vocals are super! I spent a lot of time in Jamaica many moons ago and I always enjoy Reggae. Nice job! Tom
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You can sing, dude! Excellent vocal, performance, and production.
The RD's are impressive too.
Great job on this.
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Hi Lawrence ...
Reviews are short since my stroke. Typing isn't easy at the movement. Agree with Steve about the Huey Lewis hint in your voice. Very nice indeed!
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