It was an interesting experiment but it got mixed results from me this time.

I like the lyrics and the melody. The musical arrangement seemed a bit rushed and busy to me. Maybe some BGV's and harmonies would counter and balance the music with the vocal melody.

I think you've got a good song, it's certainly not a throwaway as many of my experiments are.


I enjoyed my listen.

Charlie


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