I like it!
As others have mentioned, you've got some great lines in there.
I hesitate to mention it, but there's a glitch at 3:29 where the strings suddenly cut out for a moment.
David,
Thanks for listening, and so
critically.
Actually, that's not a glitch.

I pulled the strings there to bring the choir up, but I can hear that as a glitch too. It's too darned abrupt.
I'm surprised you didn't catch the
warbling flutter in the piano track at the very beginning!

Regards,
Bob