Nice jam.

One subjective thought about the beginning though, with the piano sounding so percussive and the high-hat hits on top of the piano the beginning sounds to me like a good piano player running through scales. May I suggest swapping the high hat hit for shaker, decreasing the number of high hat hits or adding some snare.

By the way, listened to some of your other tunes and really like "Comfort Chair".


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