This is good. Smooth jazz with Vox.... we don't get too much of that here.

The instrumentation is well done. Nice progression and the E-piano fits to perfection.

The nit for me is that the lead vocal doesn't quite fit properly. The EQ is off. Floyd mentioned it sounded to "crisp" and I would say... a bit harsh and edgy in places. But overall, the main vox has a "boxy" sound to it.

The BGV's were a nice surprise and actually were quite well done and impressive. Yeah... really nice..... in fact, I like the BGV the best of anything else in the song.

Heck, I'll go one further.... these are easily in the top 5 best BGV's ever, here in the PG forums, if not the BEST BGV's I've ever heard on this forum in any song.

The track is quite loud.... not really a problem, but do not feel that there is a need to push a track with the WAVES tools. Better to have a less loud really clean track. The listener can always turn it up.

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 10/01/15 01:17 AM.
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