Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
You get a very unique sound from your combination of instruments, David.

Live-band sound and original. And a nice enthusiasm in your vocals...

floyd


Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
I find myself quoting Floyd a lot these days. I guess he just tends to say it right. The live, raw feel was the first thing that struck me. It works well. Has a little of that Springsteen vibe. Speaking of which, you should check out "The Line" by the boss. Similar subject and extremely well written (a film within a song). You did a really nice job with a really difficult topic David. Really enjoyed it!! Take care. Greg


Well we're gonna quote both of y'all smile And, now we're off to listen to the Song Greg referenced.

Kudos for taking on the topic.

J&B


I'm just extremely thankful that three (possibly four) of the forums most competent musical commenters have posted before me because now I can quote them smile

David, I love the vibe. Your energy shines as does the fact that you thoroughly enjoy creating songs and making music. It's easy to see that you put a great deal of thought into your lyrics. Sophisticated rhyme schemes like those here do not appear by accident. In fact, it made me wonder if you've been working your way through Pat Pattison's "Songwriting Without Boundaries" - it's hard work but it's such a great book to unleash lyrical creativity!

As I listened to this work, you made me think of Jay And The Americans and "Come A Little Bit Closer" - a similar style and the same performance energy!

All the best,
Noel

P.S. "Aztec sun" is a great phrase.

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