Originally Posted By: Gibson
Thanks Alyn. I am glad that you like the song and thanks for the comment on the rhyme. Lyrics are the hardest part for me because I want to make it simple but yet to the point. I learned that lesson from my daughter when our quartet commissioned her to write a song for us based on a true experience. Her first draft did captured the story but was very long. I ask if she would take another stab at it and make it shorter and what she came back with was just remarkable...we did not change a word. So I try to use my own advice when I write lyrics. Thanks again!
Sonny


Originally Posted By: gibson
Sonny,

Great vocals by Daniel

Quote:
Rock-n-roll's changed in a drastic way
To say it bluntly
The beat is the same
But now they call it new country

What a rhyme: bluntly and country, I like that

A good start to my day!
+1 to all the other comments also
I'm looking forward to hearing more of your songs

Alyn