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Another silly Scott song, based in part on actual events. I know, been awhile, but I'm good for at least one song a year. Any feedback is appreciated. https://soundcloud.com/scott-h-olson/call-your-mama-tell-her-get-the-mailCALL YOUR MAMA, TELL HER 'GET THE MAIL' Copyright © 2015 by Scott H. Olson Wake up baby I've just had a dream And I already figured out exactly what it means I saw you dancin' on a beach, moonlight on your hair Wake up baby, I'm takin' you there Chorus Call your mama, tell her 'get the mail' I won't take no for an answer I got the tickets both on sale She can wave a long goodbye to our vapor trail Call your mama, tell her 'get the mail' Do you remember those days on Waikiki When the sun went down I sang those songs to you karaoke I knew that one by Elvis you were glowing and so tan Wake up baby we're going back again Repeat Chorus Bridge Last night the mercury was down to nine below The weather man is still forecasting snow Baby you're too hot for winter anyway Now let's go try hanging ten on Wai-a-mea Bay Repeat Chorus The drums are EZDrummer2 For the bridge I used the 684 bass guitar at half-time I believe. I didn't use all of these guitars, either. I started with these, but pared it down to the acoustic, two electric rhythm, the nylon, and the Dire. I'll have to look at the project in Sonar again.... Style is _HRKCSP1.STY (HrdRok w CrispGuit &Organ(120RS)) 995:Bass, Electric, HardRockLA Ev 120 684: Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotes 511:Guitar, Electric, Soloist Dire Ev 140 997:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockLACrispArp Ev 120 2200:Guitar, Nylon, Background CountryBrent Ev 085 844:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryRockPopping Ev 120 499:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm StoneZ Flash 1 Ev 140 406: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming 693: Guitar, Acoustic
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Scott, This is brilliant! Why isn't this on the radio?  I abhor comparisons, but I'm hearing the best of Jonathan Edwards in this one. Really nice! Regards, Bob
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Hi Scott,
This is the first song that I have heard from you and I enjoyed it a lot. Good production, lyrics, vocals and instrumentation. Sounds like what I would like to do right now! You have a very good voice and writing skills and I look forward to (hopefully) more than one a year.
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Scott,
A good write. Catchy. Your best vocal, I think. The harmonies are nice, too.
(At the risk of offending Bob), this one sounded like something Kenny Chesney would do.
I think you should replace the fingerpicking guitar with a strum (There is a high-strung strum that would be good if it is in the tempo area - or a syncopated strum). The fingerpicking doesn't fit the rest of the feel of the song - the strum would "hit the ground running".
Really good mix. Very enjoyable.
Nice to see ya around.
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Wow Scott. Top notch all the way. Very professional and a quality write and production.
Really enjoyable listen.
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Well constructed.Love this.
Thanks for listing.
Rob
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Really enjoyed that - great chorus.
Very well put together and performed.
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Hi Scott,
a catchy song with nice vocals
and harmonies.
Enjoyable listen.
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Hi Scott,
What a great song! Love the upbeat message and tempo. I'm gonna stay outta the "sounds like ..." discussion, other than to say it sounds like Scott on his best day. And there ain't a thing wrong with that!
As far as the finger picking that Floyd mentioned, I tend to agree with him. I think it would give the song just a bit more drive, and for the listener, the sense of more of an urgency to get to the beach.
But, all that said ... great song. Loved my listen!
Alan
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Scott, Catchy, catchy, catchy. Nice mix. An upbeat feel good tune. Excellent vocals. You can really sing. I really like this. You should come around more often you've been missed. Tom
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Hi Scott,
Great song, very good vocals and harmonies.
Rob and Anne-Marie
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She can wave a long goodbye to our vapor trail
Call your mama, tell her 'get the mail'
One of my favorites among a lot of great lines!! This is really good all the way around. Fun and easy to relate to. Great stuff!! Take care. Greg
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One of your best Scott! Loved it.
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Very nice listen. Enjoyed the verses and it takes off in the chorus.
Fantastic vocals. Cheers.
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Scott, that was brilliant. There is some good country on this here forum  great vocals, catchy tune excellent Alyn
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nice song,
good sound and real tracks ensemble.
Nice voice too.
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Nice work my friend.
It's a nice, upbeat, feel good song.
Loved the line about waving goodbye to our vapor trail.... that was good. It created the perfect imagery in my mind.
One thing I think maybe didn't work as well as it could or should have, is the bridge. The song is sunny and upbeat and the bridge is kind of a musical downer... slower and darker... I would consider dropping the bridge and just come straight back into the chorus. This bridge seems to fit my personal rule for "bridge or not"..."NOT" ..... because it really doesn't seem to add any new or crucial info or a twist that makes you view the song from a totally new perspective suddenly after hearing it. It's more of a filler and you don't need or want filler for the sake of filler. If you're going to add a bridge, try making it shorter. Halve it to two simple lines that add some insight. I think part of my dislike for it was that it was too long. If you need to slow it down, temporarily lose some energy, and make it darker... don't stay there long. Get back to the chorus, sunshine and energy as quickly as possible. 2 short lines and done...
If it was mine, I would come right back from the solo into the chorus. Don't give it a chance to lose the energy level you have going.
And .... shorten the title to "Get the Mail"
Man, I really liked this song. It's got that "island theme" in it and I tend to love those kind of songs.... toes in the sand, drink in my hand.... (Chesney lyrics there.... my wife is a HUGE KC fan, so I've become somewhat of an expert on island country)
Excellent write.
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Scott, since folks are comparing we'll throw ours in. How's about Chesney meets Buffet?  This has a most enjoyable upbeat feel and the write is really good with nice imagery. As Janice just said "let's go there right now!" J&B
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