Originally Posted By: 90 dB
Scott,

This is brilliant! Why isn't this on the radio? mad

I abhor comparisons, but I'm hearing the best of Jonathan Edwards in this one. Really nice!


Regards,

Bob


Whoa. Thank you, Bob!

Originally Posted By: SRP
Hi Scott,
This is the first song that I have heard from you and I enjoyed it a lot. Good production, lyrics, vocals and instrumentation. Sounds like what I would like to do right now! You have a very good voice and writing skills and I look forward to (hopefully) more than one a year.
Sonny


Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, Sonny.

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Scott,

A good write. Catchy. Your best vocal, I think. The harmonies are nice, too.

(At the risk of offending Bob), this one sounded like something Kenny Chesney would do.

I think you should replace the fingerpicking guitar with a strum (There is a high-strung strum that would be good if it is in the tempo area - or a syncopated strum). The fingerpicking doesn't fit the rest of the feel of the song - the strum would "hit the ground running".

Really good mix. Very enjoyable.

Nice to see ya around.

floyd


First, what I'm most excited about is that so far the mix is passing muster!

Regarding the guitar, you mean in that first verse? When I play the song, the way I wrote it, it's with palm-muted driving 8th or 16th notes. In the BiaB version I opted to ease into it a bit, and I'm not sure I could find the right RT. I probably just need to play that guitar part.

Thanks for checking it out and for those nice words, Floyd.

My songs are here:
https://soundcloud.com/scott-h-olson