Sergio this is fantastic! I really liked your vocals, lyrics but especially your guitar leads.
IMHO the only thing lacking here is another verse or two and maybe a chorus or bridge. This is just my opinion and others may not agree.
I really like this.
Thanks MarioD, very kind of you !
I'll eventually extend the song as you suggested. Let's see what comes out :-)
I liked it too Sergio. Enjoyed my listen very much!
Thanks Sundance for your kind words, very appreciated !
Hi Sergio,
Enjoyed everything. Good job on your guitar and organ!
Sonny
Thanks a bunch Sonny :-)
Sergio, This can get stuck in your head very easily. Nice guitar work. The vocals are well sung. I like the doubling on that one line. I would put this in the pile for a later look at possibly expanding with more lyrics. Very enjoyable. Tom
Thank you Tom, yes I had this song playing for a couple of days in my head, and at the end I could not resist, you know, it *must* come out :-)
I'm glad you liked the doubling on that line - well spotted ! - and yes, there's indeed room for future expansions :-)
Another excellent tune Sergio. Well done
Thanks Scott, glad you liked it :-)