Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
Sonny and Daniel

I keep coming back to this song for another listen.

You mentioned "A simple song that happens to be a true story"

Well, it may be true (that's great), but I don't think it's so 'simple'

This is a really amazing number. It's catchy and technically perfect because of a great balance between a mix of outstanding melody, lyrics and phrasing.

My only other comment is that the ending seems a little 'unexpected'. Maybe it could resolve a little more predicatively?

You definitely ought to explore other (additional) ways to publicize your talents. Air play maybe?

Trev

Thanks Trev, you have a much greater knowledge of the technicalities of music than I do and I always like to hear your comments to others as well as to me. As far as the ending, I am one who likes to sometimes not be predictable(not always) so as to just bring a little spice to a song (but that's just me). Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't.
I have long given up trying to go the route of the big boys (so political and what they want is usually stuff that I am not interested in). I do appreciate you having that much confidence in what I do.
Thanks again,
Sonny