Originally Posted By: tommyad
Herb, This sounds great. I like the simple lyric approach and it works. This is in the style of the Mavericks. { along with Flaco Jimenez } I do have a suggestion. The chorus doesn't rhyme. The second line of the chorus could be "Again I'll hold her tenderly". sets up to rhyme with Heaven's Angel waits for me. The tele fills are just right. I can hear Raul Malo singing this, however you did a fine job. Good one! Tom


You nailed it. I was, and still am, a huge Mavericks fan.

I battled against the "it doesn't rhyme" and decided to let it roll.

Thanks for the input and the listen.

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