Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Gorgeous writing, Tom.

"I’m simply amazed when I look down these days
The view’s so much better up here"

The very small number of words used to get to that point and make it so very powerful is a true lesson in "writing small". ZOWIE.

Your productions have gotten too good to even talk about.

Janice is...well.. Janice - what more needs to be said.

It's scary how good you have gotten.

A fan.
Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate your words more than you know. Tom
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Good and effective writing here Tom!
The 3/4 works very well, so does Janice's smooth backing vocal.

Rob
Thanks from both of us. Tom