Originally Posted By: floyd jane
"Another few steps up the mountain".... great line!

The chorus melody is gorgeous!

The orchestration is really nicely done.

"Another ad on my TV
About the me that I could be" ... nice!!

"It seems existence is a given
But am I really livin’?" ..... terrific summary line.

The French horn (I think) is a perfect addition.

The mix is excellent. Your vocal is well recorded (your best ever, I think).

Beautiful song. Excellent write.

floyd


So I'm listening and making mental notes about this song and I scroll past Floyd's comments and, 'Eureka!'

I'm not wild about the fade-out ending, but everything else is terrific and I especially like your vocals.

You're a songwriter:)

Happy New Year!

My songs are here:
https://soundcloud.com/scott-h-olson