Sounds good. Nice and clean vocal. It's just a matter of getting the polish as you mentioned.

Using the proper gear is always a HUGE plus and makes things so much easier.

You should post songs in the User Showcase even when you're just experimenting. More people will tend to see it and listen.


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.