Hi, Dina.

Welcome to the Showcase! You are off to a good start...

(you might consider editing your first post and replace the link - since it shows a blank page - with the one you posted further down - since it works) When you are logged in, there should be an Edit button on any post that you have written within the last few days...

Your songwriting shows a lot of potential. You have some very cool imagery in your lyric. The ending lines...

"O blue sky, spring green
lemon yellow jelly bean
Camille is eighteen"

...are especially nice the way they pull from what has gone before.

You don't need to be "a musician" to be a good songwriter. BIAB is the only instrument that you need - and you are doing a good job of using it.
(I have written with hit writers who could not play an instrument and could not sing - no kidding - so you are way ahead of them).

fj