Originally Posted By: olemon
Excellent, Alyn!

Totally original and authentic song that deals with a subject that's not so easy to sing and write about. The lyrics are very personal and they lead the listener right up to that two-line chorus which is powerful and brilliant.

This thing builds and builds and builds. Well done!



Thanks Scott,
I wasn't too sure how this would be received and am totally humbled by all the lovely comments, like yours blush
I left the feedback at the end fade away to allow it all to sink in. My next song will be less dramatic grin

take care and thanks again

Alyn

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