I gave a listen over morning mud....
The very sweet vocaloid voice worked quite well over the gorgeous imagery.
Thank you for your comment. I am glad you like the voice of Mew. I myself like her voice as well because it is so natural and beautiful. I think the vocaloid voice fits quite well to the song like this; its tempo is slow and melody line is simple (i.e. fewer notes) and then each note is long enough to emphasize phonetic characteristics of Japanese.
The music also works very well and not understanding Japanese makes the vocal mysterious and very mesmerizing.
I think I can understand what you mean very well
Keeping good command of English may be enough of a challenge for me but if there was a free translation/lesson site I'd probably give it some use.
Good challenge! Maybe there are some. I am afraid, however, in this specific case, it might be difficult to use them because I used classical style language like most of lyrics before 70's, which is so much different from spoken languages.
Beautifully done....yes...I like it.
Good luck with your goals.
Thank you again.
Hiroshi