Hey There,

I LOVE the picture, can I get a copy?? smile

The bed is super cool, and reflects an attitude. The only thing I thought when I listened was that it needed a main instrument, like a guitar or a sax that would pick up an identifiable melodic riff, and come in and out with that riff, building on variations of that riff. That is about all I would add. I am not trying to be silly, but the image I had in my mind while listening was "Hey, did the lead player wander off to the bathroom and forget to come back?"

The band itself and the groove is great. But it needs a hook riff, I think, in addition to the groove.

David Snyder
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