Hey I like it. Essence of Bill Halley(Haley? Hailey?) and the Comets. Has a good hook.

Like the others I would take out the count down track. Also, at the end, I could hear your chair squeaking as you turned off the recording.

Last of all, 50's feel or no, I would spread those instruments out from each other. But being crammed together does give it that 50's feel.

Good job Mate.


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