Hi Joanne,
This certainly is a beautiful song and you sing it very well!
One (tiny, tinyn, tiny) nit as far as we're concerned:
The music doesn't completely agree with the dramatic words of the first verse.
Then the music is too cheerful for such a sad story.
When she starts dreaming of life elsewhere music and lyrics fit very well.
But we certainly think this is a very good contribution to FAWM.
Lots of success!
Rob and Anne-Marie