Hi Hiroshik,
Here is what I note in your song :
- The pitch of certain notes seems to be a bit out of tone. Is it a japanese (or oriental) particularity ?
- The brass are very restrained, I think they could be more audibles.

Otherwise it is indeed a jolly (et jolie ;-) melody.

Sheers
Pascal


No hay banda! There is no band! Il n'est pas de orchestra!
No hay banda! And yet we hear a band !

(David Lynch - Mulholland Drive)