Originally Posted By: Caloo
Hi Hiroshik,
Here is what I note in your song :
- The pitch of certain notes seems to be a bit out of tone. Is it a japanese (or oriental) particularity ?
- The brass are very restrained, I think they could be more audibles.

Otherwise it is indeed a jolly (et jolie ;-) melody.

Sheers
Pascal

Hi Pascal,

Thank you very much for your comment. I really appreciate it.

As for the out-of-tune notes, I do believe it has nothing to do with Japanese nor oriental smile I have carefully listened to the song more than 10 times on PC or iPhone, by using original WAV and MP3, and on Soundcloud, I could not identify any out-of-tune notes though the tunes of two instruments I used for the melody part are a little bit unstable, so I gave up. Most probably, my ears are not good enough shocked

As for the brass, it should be due to my premature mixing ability using the console. Thank you for pointing it out.

I am glad you enjoyed my song otherwise.

Through the communication like this in this forum, I can learn a lot of things. They include how to use English (or French) especially adjective and idioms smile Thank you and all the members who gave me your comments.

Hiroshi