Have you posted this before? It sounded familiar.

It reminded me of Tom Petty Learning to fly at the beginning. My personal take is that it's for the most part, well recorded. The guitar's are a bit over effected with verb and echo that doesn't match the rest of the mix as well as it could or should.

The vocals sound like they are near the top of your range and that as a result you are straining in a few places.

Good pop song.


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