Hi Chris37

Interesting cross genre composition! I like different things about it, as expressed below:

1) I especially like the echo-ish synth you use for your melody. It creates a mood that goes very well with what I imagine could be a cinematic portrayal of your ship theme. I also like the melody as it overlays the chords. I found it to be instantly likable.

2) I also liked the Neil Young-style guitar parts with your chords. In my mind they paint a live performance version of the song which is very stirring and full of potential.

Unfortunately the instrument choices took my song induced fantasy in different directions, keeping the final song from resolving as a completely cinematic theme or a completely live performance. Given the choice, I'd really like to hear this song resolve as a cinematic theme, with a more orchestral instrumentation.

But these comments say more about my personal preference than they do about your song. I love the concept, chords and melody of this song, and I look forward to hearing more from you!